29.9.08

hi.i need to get a tagboard.fast.anyway, im going to post two poems today. one is named werewolf. this piece was done when i was getting bored during maths a few days(bout a week++) ago. the other one.... well i dont know what its calleed cos im going to do it on the spot.
here goes:
Werewolf

it stares;it glares
the grey flames flare
as spittle and dust
become one in lust
it stares;it glares
upon splashes of black
illumined by secondhand son's slack
nothing but a sigh
of sorrowed nightingale cry
echoes in vain
as endless throngs of pain
transcend further
than a single cry
and, as angels face
lies defaced
through enslaving bars,
it howls,
a living lie

end.
so?how is it.?like the previous poems,everybody just leave comments or sms me or something like that.now for the next one, which im just going to do on the spot.kay.am going to begin.

mirrors lie
with spirits high
in endless cry
what hath their souls
those ravaged souls
those cacaphonies of serenades low
know

of doom to follow?
that is their strength
at moments length
for that single mirror
reflecting alone
became thousandfold?

and darkness alone
became the mirrors only glow
oh what a blow!
seething words
and angry tears

bound the book
of hollow years
and years themsoulves,hollow,yet profound
once served as a solace ground

now they burn,
divided,yet single
for how could that asylum turn
to a burial ground
unwanted and stained
with the dust of time,

they soon become dust,in time

end.so,hows this one.please leave comments and sms.thank you.the poems about a mirror( a bathroom mirror) that breaks and lies undiscarded. you can make out its story,right? please leave comments.please.thanks.the poem might have typos as i was typing as fast as i could.please, everybody, leave comments and/or sms me. thanks everyone. going to get ms.yap to visit my blog and check the poems out.:)