Monday, October 6, 2008

7.10.08

that speck of gold
that shallow hold
of swallow's hope
in a mindless play
of the minds mope
how long,how long could it last
the candle has blown
the light once so vast
now floods only fools gold
a cold chip
of bitter ice
like a frosty whip
now hopes a lie
and thus remains a seer
blind

Comment. its called ice. its about how im feeling now

3 comments:

# Lau Kai Li said...

Hellos!
Was really surprised when I saw your tag.
I really love the poems :D

lvoes,
kaili mei

# Lau Kai Li said...

Do you have MSN?
If you have, add me in MSN yeahs?
So we can chat quite often?
:D
kaili1994@hotmail.com
That's my email :D

loves,
kaili mei

Anonymous said...

meaningful poem:)
msyap